동시에 참인 세 문장
Max Roser · 2022
좋은 글의 구조를 익혀 내 이야기로 써요. 문장과 문단마다 예시를 익히고, 구조를 보고, 같은 구조로 내 글을 쓰면 AI가 채점해요.
로저가 서로 어긋나 보이는 판단 셋을 먼저 내놓고, 한쪽만 말하는 두 습관이 각각 어떻게 무너지는지 보인 뒤, 제대로 보려면 무엇이 필요한지 말하는 첫 다섯 문단이에요.
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207 단어 · 12 문장The world is awful. The world is much better. The world can be much better. All three statements are true at the same time.
Discussions about the state of the world too often focus on the first statement: The news highlights what is going wrong, rarely mentioning the positive developments in our country or the world as a whole.
A pushback on this narrative takes it to the other extreme, which is equally damaging. Solely communicating the progress that the world has achieved becomes unhelpful, or even repugnant, when it glosses over the problems people are facing.
If we only see the problems and only hear what is going wrong, we have no hope that the future can be better. If we only hear about progress and what is going right, we become complacent and lose sight of the problems the world is facing. Both of these narrow perspectives have the same consequence: they leave us doing nothing — they are worldviews that paralyze us.
It’s hard to resist falling for only one of these perspectives. But to see that a better world is possible, we need to see that both are true at the same time: the world is awful, and the world is much better.
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Max Roser (2022), “The world is awful. The world is much better. The world can be much better.”, published online at OurWorldInData.org, licensed under CC BY 4.0. Reproduced here as an excerpt — the opening five paragraphs, unchanged.